Tuesday, January 1, 2013

Hypnotized

Melissa McKenzie is a normal 11 year old who lives in Royersville on the planet Aromia. Royersville is full of greenery, plants, friendly people who greet you every time they pass you, and a wonderful neighborhood with neighbors that are very helpful, nice, and caring like all the town people who live in Royersville.
Melissa works at her family's business, the bakery. Their business goes very well, until the mayor walks in and talks privately to Melissa's parents. The mayor seemed a bit different to Melissa. Just 2 days ago, he was bright as an apple and today he looked glum, stern, and his outfit was completely different.
When the mayor went, Melissa's parents suddenly had to close the shop. Melissa's parents start acting really weird, they don't care where or what Melissa and her siblings are going, their mood change every couple minutes, and they behave like they have no idea what their doing. Are her parents....hypnotized?

7 comments:

  1. It sounds AWESOME!
    I love the title, and the planet and town you came up with!

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  2. Oh, and I forgot, Happy New Year!!!
    Did you stay up until midnight?
    I did!

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  3. OMG!!! It sounds so awesome! I can't wait to read the actual thing! How do you just come up with ideas like these?

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  4. Also, HAPPY NEW YEAR AASTHA! I stayed up till midnight to see the countdown! It was really exciting!!!

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  5. This sounds great, Aastha! I can't wait to read it!

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